All Comments on 'Jack's ex, Jack's slave Ch. 01'

This was exceptionally good reading, especially from a new and yet unpublished author. You have every right to be pleased with this effort; I look forward to Chapter 02 and please have five stars - and welcome to Literotica!

True fantasy material - full use of all her fuck holes and $21m!

Keep up the good work.

A great beginning! Five stars and it's been added to my bookmarks.

I hope my own story is like yours in the end

Such a gorgeous, vicious beginning with so much potential to move forward into a loving but still just as disciplined relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow--very nice! Hard to believe this is your first effort! Please continue the story...

It's good but I seem to recall a very similar story from S1lverF0x

Start with editing. I usually don't complain about spelling and such but a couple of times I lost the flow in this story of abuse due to spelling/editing errors. By the way, he's a jackass.

I have read all ur chapters and love them all though it was real sadistic it made it that more interesting

He takes a young woman that's obviously emotional devastated and instead of helping her he abuses her? He could have gently taken control, cashed the check, put most of it in her name and then forced her to get some mental help. Instead he turns into a vengeful animal. I won't bother to read any more of this junk.

however, I think this "getting in shape" stuff is b.s. I mean, he should eat healthy food and walk some, and that's it. Oh--stretching is important. Gentle stretches. Don't sit at all.

If he really wants to do more, fine. But--to himself--don't strain yourself.

but i'm a Mormon wife--one of three. Our husband's a philosophy professor. Quite resprected in "animal rights."

You probably don't believe I'm Mormon and one of three wives.

Why not?

Look at how you describe couples, here?

These Lit sites give me more freedom. And I have very little freedom.

But I don't get beaten very much anymore. The two new wives are younger than me. (One's only--) Their asses are cuter. Much cuter.

Thank you god.

(And I really don't know what to do or have anyone to talk to.)

Besides, I'm just talking to a guy, here. Look at the new wives pics.

If this keep up, I may be able to escape. (This isn't cheezy. It's "real." Ha, ha)

Joke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(sorry)

i sorta understand how he can be angry,but come on! esentualy rapeing her throught is an instent turn-off. mabe say "i'd like to think on this,your welcome to sleep on the couch" and then she has the night to think ? i like it but it needs a little work on jack's asswhole atittude.

I didn't get how he switched from being mostly normal at the beginning to 100% Bdsm person

i have read the comments posted previously and they are obviously from people who do not understand the lifestyle like you and i do. in response to the one posted on 5/29/14, what is your version of "normal"? is it the vanilla life that most people these days lead? a person can lead a "normal" regular life outside the house and do things any other person would do, but have this private part of themselves that is involved in bdsm. for all you know, half of your friends may be involved in it, and you wouldnt know unless they told you, because we are good at controlling this part of our lives. bdsm is normal, despite the way the media seems to paint it these days with that damn movie and book, 50 shades of grey (btw 50 shades is not a real bdsm relationship it is forced and abusive.....). i won't even bother responding to the rest, but that was my 2 cents. keep up the good work!

Fantastic!