All Comments on 'Jack's ex, Jack's slave Ch. 02'

I'll be waiting to read more.

Please don't make me wait too long

ok ok so I loved the frist chapter couldnt wait for chaper 2. to be honest your screen name got me curious so I checked out your profit and was shocked we are around the same age, just makes it hotter or something I don't know. chapter 1 did need more romance and cuddling but I already told you that. but chapter 2....I only got to page 7 and just started laughing so hard really? so the girl working at the store and jacks girlfriend just start getting naked and pull out his dick.....lol ya that's ever guys dream come true isn't it? your going to have so many guys loving this story. well I had to share with you that you gave me good laugh, I am going to read the rest of the story now then off to bed, hope they cuddle soon Damn

I'm reading this story and can't help but feel sad. She proved herself to love him and try to make up for the past. He doesn't love her at all....in fact it borders in hate. No emotion except male chauvinism. A good Master at least feels SOMETHING For his sub. It's just very sad indeed. She is stupid too. For that kind of money she could get anybody to satisfy her need for dominance. Not some deranged revenge seeking ex. On a better note... The story was well written.

like the other person who posted I absolutely LOVED the first chapter and I even loved the idea that he would be taking some anger out on her but I thought it would be intermingled with affection. In my opinion it kind of ruins the sexy if there are no feelings at all on his part. I mean I know she 'did him wrong' but she just gave him 21 million and herself as repayment. He didn't even seem interested in her over Laura which seems silly, and the no kissing thing was really sad :( but much of the story was very sexy and you are an excellent writer. I just hope he develops real feelings soon and the story becomes slightly more realistic (her being a person some of the time but an object much of the time). Overall though, thanks for an amazing read!

What a horrible chapter. I understand your name "Angryyoungman". You sure seem to have the anger part down pat. Not that it makes for interesting reading.

LITTEN UP!!!!!!! way to deep on the anger dud. he's f...ken ritch becase of her!!!!!!