All Comments on 'Jamaican Holiday Ch. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Confusing story line

This story tends to swing from one pint to another. Not sure if that is intentional or not. Keep going, want to see if you can tie this relationship together in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please continue

more please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Waiting for more

We can not wait for the next chapter

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
Pussy boi is back

Pussy boi is back but has yet to sucked till a stud bust a nut into his belly. And his tight pussy has yet to take his Masters huge cock and be filled with cum. I know his wife is a bit discussed and maybe she envy's him sucking the Master and others thick cocks, but hey it is part of the deal they both asked for.

marypatmnmarypatmnabout 10 years ago
mary schekse

love to be pierced fucked lie thjis Mary

rachael11566rachael11566almost 10 years ago
wishing it was us

being a ex Dom, and now a wanna be cuckold who wishes that some black Master would seduce my submissive wife, and make the both of us black owned, story got me so excited day dreaming of it being us that the story was about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More?

Somehow, the ending sort of hinted that there's more to come.

Does the wife end up her "Dom's" live in submissive, divorced and owned completely?

Do they both end up dominated, with the husband divorced and made a Eunuch guardian for the master's brothel?

Where does this all end?

gordo12gordo12over 9 years ago
Utter drivel

First chapter I read and couldn't get past the first page! Pure crap!

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 8 years ago
Love black cock

Your stories are great, I love black cock. Xoxoxoxo Annette

backtothe50sbacktothe50sover 7 years ago
A Slave that Loves being a Salve

OMG..This woman can take some cock. Surely she had to be more than disinterested after four days of fucking and sucking. But, giving up would have been worse because she may have never gotten the opportunity to take her favorite BBC in all three of her holes again. I can see why it took her a couple of weeks to recover, but I'M sure both Bitch and Pussy Boi were ready for more by the time they saw their Master again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
White folk!!

There seems to be so many of you white people who get off on this type of thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Dave69

Interesting story. It was good until the master shite took over. Sorry but we enjoy interracial but the master stuff well no!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Jaye is one selfish bitch. Guess you can’t trust a whore.

firedogg81firedogg815 months ago

Great story I wish it could have continued

peter34xpeter34x4 months ago

Great story! I loved the whole journey very much. I would like to learn more about the young couple with the collars in Jamaica. Their story would very interesting!! Moreover at this chapter I expected they would give her a Queen of Space tattoo & one more with a humiliation aspect, instead of more piercings. Finally their daughters stories would be interesting also

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