by lorana
To short, could use a lot more detail to the story line itself. But keep up the good work.
In case anyone's interested, I think the next chapter might be a long time coming. Check my bio for updates. Right now I'm working on another story ( there's a summary on my bio of it!) so I think I'll get one chapter of that out before I go back to this one. I appreciate the votes and comments everyone !!!!!
In case anyone is reading this the Author updated her profile and wants us to pick which one she continues first.
I pick this one!!
I want more Adam :D
Please finish this story!!! Also, I think you could use an editor.