All Comments on 'Jan and Tim'

For me. Best friend and his wife fucking on the floor in their bedroom, he see them and does nothing, they end up staying best friends and now the 'best friend' is going to be the new V.P.? Not a chance in hell in the real world much less in a LW story. Tim doesn't have the balls to be a CEO of a company. The two cheaters made out like fat rats with really no punishment except a little guilt but really only because they got caught both emotionally and physically. She actually called out 'Mike' twice when she was in bed with her husband on vacation, he'd have been miles ahead if he'd just packed his bags and left then. Something else, since she kept the house and knew he'd seen them fucking on the carpet it never occurred to her to at least change the carpet? I really hate the sound of the word 'wimp', even the look of it on the screen, not just the sound of it screams 'coward', 'willing cuckold' or just plain old 'pussy', which describes Tim to a 'T'. The only thing that seemed satisfying to me was the bottle of Drambuie, good stuff Drambuie, not so the story. Signed: BTW

I loved the story. Great story. Well-written. 5 atars. I remember those thoughts lusting after a beautiful woman from high school who dated and married my best friend. I never acted on my lust and even when their marriage was in trouble i did not try to move in on my best friend's wife. This story had real power in that it is entirely believable. I have lived it. I thought it was great the Tim and Jan reconciled and that they are happily married again. Mike found his mate and has moved on in life. Tim's promotion of Mike is admirable and right as he will do well in that position. great story

Terrible and confusing story too. You make men wimps. It’s crappy

This is some gay shit.

Although they are not lovers, the relationship between Tim and Mike does have similarities with the bond shared by the men of Brokeback Mountain. Both friendships wax and wane over the course of decades. Although powerfully drawn together, the members of both pairings bring equal parts of pleasure and pain to each other's lives. Both relationships are simultaneously profound sources of healing and toxicity.

The relationship between Jack and Ennis ends through either accident or murder, depending on one's point of view. By the conclusion of this story, no such external force has intervened in ties that bind Tim and Mike. Through months of separation they have reached a point of relative equanimity. Given their history, Tim's idea to offer the VP position to Mike is full of heart yet foolhardy. Hopefully Mike has better insight into their dynamics and will decline the job, choosing to maintain a substantial distance from Tim and Jan. That's where they all function best.

Tim is a rich CUCK. End of story...

Lusting after a friend's wife must be quite common but acting on it is despicable and that level of betrayal from both is beyond forgiveness in my opinion. Give that man some backbone.

Just more of the same cuck crap from this author. Wish I could go lower tha one star. How about negative fifty for all the stories here. I am done with this writer......out

Cucky shit .

One star

Nice reconcilation story. Wishful thinking. Tim would never have gone back. Mike could go fuck himself. Why take sloppy seconds from your best friend who wasn't a friend at all? Everytime Tim had sex with his wife, Mike would be in the back of his mind.

Wimp.

A good solid story, worth 4/5.

You like wimps and you like RAACs. I like btbs, but l can like a solidly written reconciliation.

Make your men a tad stronger and less wimpy and you’d get 5/5 from me.

god i hope these ppl dont breed. they too dumb to be alive as long as they have

What a horrible story. Not only did the cheaters get their own happy ending but you made it so it was the husband would feel it was his fault. Not his selfish wife who cheated and couldn't keep her legs close, not his supposed best friend who slept with his evil wife? And why did you have to make the husband so pathetic and wimpy? HORRIBLE!

Eh, too happy an ending for all the cheaters. She cheats, she calls her husband the guys name when they have sex, and he just shrugs and gets over it. Nope.

Superb cuck💩

Please use fewer exclamation points. Notice how effective that sentence was without one. Now, let’s redo the sentences with exclamation points.

Please use fewer exclamation points! Notice how effective that sentence was without one! Now, let’s redo the sentences with exclamation points!

I actually re-read your sentences as though the exclamation points weren’t there. In virtually every instance, they are improved. I’m sorry, I meant, “they are improved!"

The essential dramatic conflict was driven by two people speaking and not listening. In normal dialogue, a person understands when a point is left unsaid, and they will push back until the other party is understood. This repartee style of dialogue where the two parties are having a disjointed dialogue, and are sober and/or sane, frustrates the reader more than driving the story further down the road. It's okay to frustrate the reader, which is transferred to the character, but don't alienate them with unrealistic dialogue.

Where'd the ending go?

One star for more willing cuckold horse shit. That Tim was truly a weak pathetic fuck. I was also unaware that appointments to division manager of some obscure corporation are routinely covered by the international nes media.

No, just no

Huh? The setup had some interest but when Tim went all fatalistic and ran away was dumb. No mention about whether Tim heard his name called out when on the bathroom floor with Mike. And what is with him becoming friends with Mike? And the dialog was so unrealistic ad it was always one sided to create misunderstanding. Uggh.

Author's worst story. Why? Forget the one night slip and her long term lust. The problem is Tim. He never tells her how she calls out Mike's anem in bed. Loses all confidence. Figures marriage is doomed. Prepares for the inevitable. Withdraws. Sees them at the party (somehow nothing comes out that she called out "Tim" while fucking Mike while drunk on bathroom floor). Steps aside as hurt wuss, trying to be noble, no confrontation, ghosts Jan. Wtf? And to make it worse there is Mike. Hey even though he has lusted after a couple of married women (simultaneously no less), hey don't worry, he is really a great guy. I mean even Tim likes him and wishes him well with Jan, who btw has lost all sexual interest in Mike, and desperately wants Tim back, but yeah Tim is a sad sack loser. And finally the worst. Yeah the author sets up Tim and Mike as friends and work colleagues. Wtf!!!?!!!!

Que mierda...

Femdom agitprop, but in a sweet, human context married people can relate to and understand. Well-written.

So shw craves and sleepsnqith his best friend and they are still together wtf bad story bad premise

I had to keep reading parts of the story over to figure who was fucking. I kept wanting to stop reading your story because it was so poorly written. I managed to read it to the end, and realized I had wasted time i could have used reading a better story by a better writer.

Ok, the one time at the party was a mistake, I get that. But the author suggests that they did it again at the hotel when he said ‘Afterwards sitting side my side on the bed…’. After what? Then again he later says she met him again twice whilst Tim was away and they both appeared to have ‘satisfied their curiosity’. So, if I’m reading this correctly they did it at least three more times after the ‘mistake’. That puts a totally different spin on things. Please correct me if I have misunderstood.

To the prior commenter, it was only one time on thr bathroom floor while inebriated, when she called dout "Tim". Of course later in Barbados she called out "Mike" while banging hubby. Yes they did see each other twice since that "fateful weekend". That was after the incident occurred not when Tim went on tour. Here "sees" means is not usual but they met and talked and the lust was gone for both parties. Can see how it can be misinterpreted but it is made clear that it was one mistake at the party. The word is "see". Yes they saw each other and talked but there was no longer anything there, which fits with her character. Now meanwhile the story is still awful because (a) Tim is a pansy ass who despite being so successful in his career, cannot confront anyone worth a damn, and (b) Mike is an asshole, he is not a good guy, he screws married women, more than once, and hiring him? Ridiculous.

It truly was a one off mistake. When they met every time afterwards, it was already understood that the 'one time' was it, and it satisfied both their curiosities, and would never happen again. Their meetings afterwards was to bring it to a close with very personal conversations to make sure that bringing Jan and Tim back together was of the utmost importance, and to help each other patch up the damage caused as much as possible.... Curiosities in the wrong places at the wrong times, truly do sometimes kill the cats involved. 5/5 indeed for a well written story, and a true to life format. Thank you.

I can understand Tim and Jan reconciling after a drunken on off, though complicated by her calling out Mike's name in Barbados.

But Mike is not a good guy. He has banged married women more than once. And hiring him at the end is just surreal. He is not trustworthy.

I get the reconciliation, but Tim's walkabout and misreading the situation, then placing faith in Mike who is in reality a sleazy guy, just wrecked this story.