All Comments on 'Jan and Tim'

I get the reconciliation, but Tim's walkabout and misreading the situation, then placing faith in Mike who is in reality a sleazy guy, just wrecked this story.

I can understand Tim and Jan reconciling after a drunken on off, though complicated by her calling out Mike's name in Barbados.

But Mike is not a good guy. He has banged married women more than once. And hiring him at the end is just surreal. He is not trustworthy.

It truly was a one off mistake. When they met every time afterwards, it was already understood that the 'one time' was it, and it satisfied both their curiosities, and would never happen again. Their meetings afterwards was to bring it to a close with very personal conversations to make sure that bringing Jan and Tim back together was of the utmost importance, and to help each other patch up the damage caused as much as possible.... Curiosities in the wrong places at the wrong times, truly do sometimes kill the cats involved. 5/5 indeed for a well written story, and a true to life format. Thank you.

To the prior commenter, it was only one time on thr bathroom floor while inebriated, when she called dout "Tim". Of course later in Barbados she called out "Mike" while banging hubby. Yes they did see each other twice since that "fateful weekend". That was after the incident occurred not when Tim went on tour. Here "sees" means is not usual but they met and talked and the lust was gone for both parties. Can see how it can be misinterpreted but it is made clear that it was one mistake at the party. The word is "see". Yes they saw each other and talked but there was no longer anything there, which fits with her character. Now meanwhile the story is still awful because (a) Tim is a pansy ass who despite being so successful in his career, cannot confront anyone worth a damn, and (b) Mike is an asshole, he is not a good guy, he screws married women, more than once, and hiring him? Ridiculous.

Ok, the one time at the party was a mistake, I get that. But the author suggests that they did it again at the hotel when he said ‘Afterwards sitting side my side on the bed…’. After what? Then again he later says she met him again twice whilst Tim was away and they both appeared to have ‘satisfied their curiosity’. So, if I’m reading this correctly they did it at least three more times after the ‘mistake’. That puts a totally different spin on things. Please correct me if I have misunderstood.

I had to keep reading parts of the story over to figure who was fucking. I kept wanting to stop reading your story because it was so poorly written. I managed to read it to the end, and realized I had wasted time i could have used reading a better story by a better writer.

So shw craves and sleepsnqith his best friend and they are still together wtf bad story bad premise

Femdom agitprop, but in a sweet, human context married people can relate to and understand. Well-written.

Que mierda...

Author's worst story. Why? Forget the one night slip and her long term lust. The problem is Tim. He never tells her how she calls out Mike's anem in bed. Loses all confidence. Figures marriage is doomed. Prepares for the inevitable. Withdraws. Sees them at the party (somehow nothing comes out that she called out "Tim" while fucking Mike while drunk on bathroom floor). Steps aside as hurt wuss, trying to be noble, no confrontation, ghosts Jan. Wtf? And to make it worse there is Mike. Hey even though he has lusted after a couple of married women (simultaneously no less), hey don't worry, he is really a great guy. I mean even Tim likes him and wishes him well with Jan, who btw has lost all sexual interest in Mike, and desperately wants Tim back, but yeah Tim is a sad sack loser. And finally the worst. Yeah the author sets up Tim and Mike as friends and work colleagues. Wtf!!!?!!!!

Huh? The setup had some interest but when Tim went all fatalistic and ran away was dumb. No mention about whether Tim heard his name called out when on the bathroom floor with Mike. And what is with him becoming friends with Mike? And the dialog was so unrealistic ad it was always one sided to create misunderstanding. Uggh.

No, just no

One star for more willing cuckold horse shit. That Tim was truly a weak pathetic fuck. I was also unaware that appointments to division manager of some obscure corporation are routinely covered by the international nes media.

Where'd the ending go?

The essential dramatic conflict was driven by two people speaking and not listening. In normal dialogue, a person understands when a point is left unsaid, and they will push back until the other party is understood. This repartee style of dialogue where the two parties are having a disjointed dialogue, and are sober and/or sane, frustrates the reader more than driving the story further down the road. It's okay to frustrate the reader, which is transferred to the character, but don't alienate them with unrealistic dialogue.

Please use fewer exclamation points. Notice how effective that sentence was without one. Now, let’s redo the sentences with exclamation points.

Please use fewer exclamation points! Notice how effective that sentence was without one! Now, let’s redo the sentences with exclamation points!

I actually re-read your sentences as though the exclamation points weren’t there. In virtually every instance, they are improved. I’m sorry, I meant, “they are improved!"

Superb cuck💩

Eh, too happy an ending for all the cheaters. She cheats, she calls her husband the guys name when they have sex, and he just shrugs and gets over it. Nope.

What a horrible story. Not only did the cheaters get their own happy ending but you made it so it was the husband would feel it was his fault. Not his selfish wife who cheated and couldn't keep her legs close, not his supposed best friend who slept with his evil wife? And why did you have to make the husband so pathetic and wimpy? HORRIBLE!

god i hope these ppl dont breed. they too dumb to be alive as long as they have

A good solid story, worth 4/5.

You like wimps and you like RAACs. I like btbs, but l can like a solidly written reconciliation.

Make your men a tad stronger and less wimpy and you’d get 5/5 from me.

Wimp.

Nice reconcilation story. Wishful thinking. Tim would never have gone back. Mike could go fuck himself. Why take sloppy seconds from your best friend who wasn't a friend at all? Everytime Tim had sex with his wife, Mike would be in the back of his mind.

Cucky shit .

One star

Just more of the same cuck crap from this author. Wish I could go lower tha one star. How about negative fifty for all the stories here. I am done with this writer......out

Lusting after a friend's wife must be quite common but acting on it is despicable and that level of betrayal from both is beyond forgiveness in my opinion. Give that man some backbone.

Tim is a rich CUCK. End of story...

Although they are not lovers, the relationship between Tim and Mike does have similarities with the bond shared by the men of Brokeback Mountain. Both friendships wax and wane over the course of decades. Although powerfully drawn together, the members of both pairings bring equal parts of pleasure and pain to each other's lives. Both relationships are simultaneously profound sources of healing and toxicity.

The relationship between Jack and Ennis ends through either accident or murder, depending on one's point of view. By the conclusion of this story, no such external force has intervened in ties that bind Tim and Mike. Through months of separation they have reached a point of relative equanimity. Given their history, Tim's idea to offer the VP position to Mike is full of heart yet foolhardy. Hopefully Mike has better insight into their dynamics and will decline the job, choosing to maintain a substantial distance from Tim and Jan. That's where they all function best.

This is some gay shit.

Terrible and confusing story too. You make men wimps. It’s crappy

I loved the story. Great story. Well-written. 5 atars. I remember those thoughts lusting after a beautiful woman from high school who dated and married my best friend. I never acted on my lust and even when their marriage was in trouble i did not try to move in on my best friend's wife. This story had real power in that it is entirely believable. I have lived it. I thought it was great the Tim and Jan reconciled and that they are happily married again. Mike found his mate and has moved on in life. Tim's promotion of Mike is admirable and right as he will do well in that position. great story

For me. Best friend and his wife fucking on the floor in their bedroom, he see them and does nothing, they end up staying best friends and now the 'best friend' is going to be the new V.P.? Not a chance in hell in the real world much less in a LW story. Tim doesn't have the balls to be a CEO of a company. The two cheaters made out like fat rats with really no punishment except a little guilt but really only because they got caught both emotionally and physically. She actually called out 'Mike' twice when she was in bed with her husband on vacation, he'd have been miles ahead if he'd just packed his bags and left then. Something else, since she kept the house and knew he'd seen them fucking on the carpet it never occurred to her to at least change the carpet? I really hate the sound of the word 'wimp', even the look of it on the screen, not just the sound of it screams 'coward', 'willing cuckold' or just plain old 'pussy', which describes Tim to a 'T'. The only thing that seemed satisfying to me was the bottle of Drambuie, good stuff Drambuie, not so the story. Signed: BTW

stories that I have ever read

husbands DO remain friends with the guy that had an affair with your wife. Besides friendship, you offer him a Vice Presidency? Sure, happens everyday!

And since that guy knows how to get in your wife's panties so easily, it is always best to take his advice when it comes to what she likes sexually. He knows what she likes because he's been there; more often than you!

What utter bullshit!

Different. Tim, in the back of his mind would always carry doubts about Jan. He loved her so much is the reason Tim stayed but those doubts were hard wired. Who would want that kind of marriage? Nice story. Quite enjoyable.

I don’t agree with most of the comments by those who disliked this story. But I didn’t understand why the author created the impression that the affair with Mike was continuing (the gold car in the driveway), but never had either Tim or Jan address it. It should have mattered, shouldn’t it?

Hated the story. I wish you gave Tim more of a backbone. The wife was a selfish whore and his so called best friend is an asshole. I hate how he pretty much got away with fucking the whore with no punishment from Tim and got a happy ending himself. Even though Tim was a wimp, I still felt bad for the dude.

As much as I like your stories, this was downright horrible. Tim is a spineless coward, Mike is a manipulative asshole and Jan is a round-heeled slut. No redeeming qualities for any of these idiots.

She cheats and still has fond feelings for the lover. The husband is a wimp, blames himself and continues to be best friends with the lover, really?!

Face it, Tim will always be #2 to Mike for Jan. Fuck Mike.

This has to be the most stupid plot on this site. The wife cheats in more ways than one, and somehow the husband blames himself.And then he promotes the guy who shit on him. The author clearly inhabits a different universe than normal men.

My wife calls out another man's name, especially a rival, time for the divorce to begin.

You lost me with: She and Mike had seen each other twice since that fateful weekend and it seemed that both had gotten the other "out of the system" and were ready to move on.

To me it reads they met as fuck buddies. Quite ambiguous there

The whole concept is wrong. After hearing his wife exclaim the name of his friend, not once but twice during a passionate interlude. It is no wonder that Tim lost interest in romance with his wife. As if that is not enough, his stupid wife spreads her legs for his best friend, in his own home. To top it all off she tries to convince herself of her innocence in the activity.

No way a man could put up with that shit. Kick her to the curb where she belongs.

No real friend would do something like that to his buddy. Cuckolding is the ultimate travesty.

You write that she walked the same.carpet where she cuckolded Tim. Unfortunately, that was your story.

The author seems to have a natural talent in writing cuck stories.

I understand where the author is taking this and I enjoyed the story. But, I not sure Tim would have recovered. A lot of pain there. Maybe too much to reconcile. *****

This whole story shows was written was to show what a wimpy cuck is: TIM.

Great job portraying a man who's not a man, a pathetic replica of a man. I think you didn't miss a single thing, Maybe you should have let him suck Mike's cock before he fucked his wife while he was watching.

Did you watch yourself in the mirror while you were writing this crap?

She took a shower after hang sex with Mike, and didn't even ask the husband if he wanted to go down on her. Hopefully she learned from this.

WOW!!! Second time through and this was just ugly!!!

This author can do good work but this is soooo terribly plotted with huge holes in the characters.

".....her only thoughts at that moment were of Tim and how much she loved him" and that while fucking his "friend"??!! Are you insane or what! A wife, screaming the name of my friend while making "love" to me a wife cheating on me and all he has to do is take her back??!! Not on your life! She is and remains a cheating slut !! Only in your pervert fantasy its different!

Something doesnt feel right.

I like a happy ending, but this feels off.

She lusted after his friend for years.

When marriage started going wrong, instead of working on it, she cheated.

Best friend betrayed him that badly and he stayed friends with him?

In which serial sexual predator of married females, Mike, is castrated by husband of his latest conquest.

His philosophy of screwing other men's wives but not wanting to harm their marriages tells the tale

I enjoyed this story; I've read it multiple times. I find it missing Tim's transformation and acceptance. Other than working his ass off away from home what did he do that changed his outlook? Absence makes the heart grow fonder? Did he just miss the comfortable relationship and when Mike spun his tale Tim changed his mind? That sort of epiphany deserves more time and space on the page.

Also-caribbean back story. Did I miss a chapter?

author loves pathetic humiliated cuckold husbands and makes them go back with serial cheating whore wives .

pathetic wimp cuckold faggoty shit .

pathetic cuck shit.

How exactly was Mike a friend to Tim?

Ol Mike has thing for other guy's wives. Out of jealousy he pursues his best friend's wife for years anf finally forces the issue at a party in friend's houe while wife is drunk. Next day he wants another go but when turned down he says he hopes he didn't harm marriage. Marriage destroyed he jumps back on wife a few times while also pursuing other guy's wife.

In the end Tim comes back and rewards him.

This story could have been written by Matt Moreau or one of the brits like him

Well written I suppose but all of main characters are pathetic

She plays two guys against each other all their lives. Fantasizing during sex about one while married to the other. Destroys husband and feels so bad about cheating she continues to do it.

Husband leaves, not clear if he has sexual relstionship with another female. Comes home, still has erectile disfunction but in the end they are all best friends

You are indeed cagey if anyone falls for this ludicrous story.

HAVING BEEN THE GUY WHOSE NAME WAS CALLED OUT BY SOMEONE ELSE'S WIFE WHILE HE WAS SCREWING HER, I CAN ASSURE YOU HUSBANDS DO NOT REACT LIKE YOURS DID.

She got tossed, he came after me-his tough luck that he lost that

fight. Felt bad for guy so after I helped him up and assisted him into the bar's bathroom to wash off blood, I filled him in on the facts. One, that she had chased after me and I kept turning her down but finally I had enough of his insults about construction workers being inbred idiots and decided to give his wife a good fucking and shaft him in a passive-aggresive way. Not my fault he was shitty in the sack as well as having a loathsome personality. Truth be told I was a long way from being the first guy she had taken to her bed.

Oops guess I lied-I REALLY DID NOT FEEL SORRY OR HIM IN THE LEAST. GUY SHOWS UP IN BLUE COLLAR BAR EVERY FRIDAY WEARING A SUIT AND PROCEEDS TO QUESTION THE MENTAL ACUITY AND LINEAGE OF REDNECKS GETS WHAT IS COMING TO HIM

This was pathetic on too many levels to mention.

Gross.

Tim is a cuck wimp, Jan is a stupid ass cheating slut and Mike is one of the biggest piece of shit assholes who ever existed.

May they all rot.

Good story but still a whore

yikes! made me feel confused, then just bad.

Wanting mike to send him more cum

FUCK YOU AND FUCK YOU AGAIN AND THEN FUCK YOU SOME MORE AND AFTER YOU FUCK YOU'RE SELF PLEASE REPEAT THE PROCESS OVER AND OVER AGAIN SO AS NOT TO EVER HAVE TIME TO EVER WRITE SHIT LIKE THIS AGAIN !!!

but i wouldnt want to insult shit. this is worse than anything MM or ukresearcher ever wrote. this crap is easily in the top 5 worst stories ive ever had the misfortune to waste my time reading. i could list a dozen things about this POS story that makes no fucking sense. but why bother. i can only hope that i dont forget and accidentally read something else by this retard.

To go back to being friends with an ex that cheated in her heart and mind calling out his friends name while fing and then being friends with him. This story is about a wimp who has a candy a$$

the #1 confidence builder of all times. TK U MLJ LV NV

punishment in this story was poor Tim. Wife had a semi-sexual affair with Mike for all of her marriage, then actually fucked him in her house with guests downstairs. Then met him at a hotel. Marianne got to fuck Mike while she was married and had no consequences there. Tim forgave his cunt wife, took his friend back who fucked up his life and his marriage and for doing such a good job of that got a tremendous promotion at work. Now, everyone knows Tim is a cuckold, wife will get to fuck Mike her obsession again and maybe his cheater of a wife too and maybe Mike's Dad, the guy with all of the clout in the world. And poor old Tim just gets the leavings and has to suck it up because evidently he's good enough to rise to the top position in a multi-national company but can't have a private life for shit. Evidently the only people that exist in that town are manipulators and cheating sluts. Maybe he needs to buy him a wife from China or something. Maybe get a hobby, like trying to find his balls. Probably take a while to find them but he would be better off if he did.

RAAC at it's absolute worst. Good writing couldn't even save this piece of shit.

Mike rapes Tim's wife and Tim is wimp enough to let it go and want to be friends?

Huh uh.

I can't really enjoy sissy stories but with yours I don't feel nauseous ,so it's the prose that makes it bearable.

2 subjectively 4 objectively.

I don't understand. She calls out her fantasy lover's name twice during sex with husband, she screws her fantasy lover during a party with the husband at the party, and she agrees to meet him at a motel for a talk. Yet it was the husband's fault or she drank to much or the husband was too busy actually hosting the party. Oh, I forgot she really, really loved the husband (or so she professes). The wife and the friend should both be gone, gone, gone.

What is the White Male military fetish about?

They "put their lives on the line". Hell, drug dealers and pimps put their lives on the line. Hit men and gang bangers put their lives on the line. The US military does not fight for American freedom and justice. As a Black man, I can say without a doubt, that the only people that Black Americans have ever had to fight for freedom and justice is White Americans.

The American military fights to intimidate and steal the land, resources and labor of other nations. They started that "questionable" tradition here with the indigenous people. They are thugs and predators. Even in this story the thug is fucking his best friends wife.

Is it simply that Americans are so savage and ruthless that they don't know any better? Don't you people have any integrity or honor?

Robert

Marvelous. Well done. Thank you for the pleasure and enjoyment of your skill.

i like your writting very much, you are very good at portraying the 'cuckold lifestyle' in a way as to make it a good read, and thats the problem i have, i hate the basic concept of cuckoldery in your stories, but love your writting prowess.

Wince...not my cup of tea. I have a hard time believing that a man wouldn't continue to have resentments.

Excuse me. I should clarify. ONE or the other person will get blamed. Sometimes it will be the wife, sometimes the cad other man. In this one, the guy just seemed to drop everything. All the anger...all the resentment. Why? Fucked if I know!

And this was one of the failures of the writing (this was not easy to read, btw): EVERYTHING significant happened off screen. Every important conversation was dropped on us out of the blue. Tim talked with Mike. What was said? I don't know!

Marriane was fucking Mike? Huh? What was the arrangement between wife and Mike Senior? When did she talk to him? What did he promise her?

In a bid for adding tension, the author thought that keeping a lot of crap secret would add mystery or tension. Perhaps. It also removed clarity and belief in the characters and the story.

Tim came off as a wimp. Mike never got dinged by anything. Everyone lived happily ever after. Okay. Aren't they LUCKY that she fucked around so everything could be fixed?

I know it happens...but I didn't believe this version of that fairy tale.

Somewhere along the line when you were growing up you deep-throated one too many cocks and buggered one too many billy goats, of course now you get buggered by the billy goats you cockless cuck.

Wow just wow, somewhere along the line when you were growing up someone failed you miserably. WAAC Story yuck

Having unprotected sex with another man IS cheating!!!!! How do you get to a stupid and warped mindset that her having voluntary unprotected sexual intercourse with Mike when she could have stopped is not adultery?

The plot, while not totally original is good. Did Jan actually cheat? That's a nice twist. She had unprotectected sex with another man sure. But cheat? No.

Goo writing style. Hope to read lots more from you!

A cheating slut wife/wimp cuckolded story. How original (not). Hey author, get some backbone.

ok i normally dont say this but the protagonist is a motherfuckin wimp. the oh im drunk i thought it was you . oh im drunk i stuffed the elder wand up my ass just doesnt cut it. if there has been a penis in your willing wife's pussy thats not yours, well tell the cheatin skank to go to motherfuckin hell. and the ending?? what kind of shit is that?

This story reminds me of a VERY old cartoon series (early 20th) called Alphonse and Gaston. Each always deferred to the other, so they never got anything done. "After you, Alphonse". "No, after you, Gaston!"

A lot of drama and tension here. Jan cheated emotionally and Tim suffered.Then Jan cheated for real and Tim left and both suffered. Mike just got drunk. Mike also screwed around and Tim forgave him. I didn't like that and I think it will haunt him. Oh well, it is what it is.

Now back to real life.

HA

and should accept it and move on. TK U MLJ LV NV

if he has to piss you mouth would catch the piss. Like I've before they can write but they specilize in this RAAC shit

Winterfrog kicks all damn pussy hounds in the balls! DWhuecuck does not even have balls. Winterfrog rules.

Why can't LW authors learn proper use of pronouns? It's "Tim and me". "You and me". Plus probably many others in this story that I haven't taken the time to enumerate.

This error isn't just limited to Brit writers either.

In my book drunkenness is no excuse for unacceptable behavior. I know, I know, it's done every day. That still doesn't excuse it.

And, it's not the basis for a reconciliation either.

Lets see wife has fantasy about my best friend then follows through on those fantasies I'll think I wont do anything about it apart from making my best friend my new VP.

Yeap sounds like a really probable situation, if you believe that I have a nice home at 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue you may like to buy

I like your writing style but I have too put you in the same group as matt monroe, winterfrog, and the rest of those, "make the husband a wimp writers". I find it strange that so many writer make the husbands so much of a pussy. In most of the stories the women make a mistake by tripping and some mans dick just fall in their pussies yet the same writers, when the man fucks up they fry'em. I never realize that there are some many pussy as men out there.

your main character runs a company think about it this makes this a very very very dumb story, she's a slut and he is as dumb as any person can be.

Why did Tim apologize to Jan when he confronted her? It's just not human nature.

primary responsibility of the new VP of Operations: provide endless creampies for Tim

An OK story, that reads as if you had at least five different stories and five different styles in mind and you decided to just dump them all in together; like the second draft of a much longer story that you simply gave up on and slapped a feel good ending on

You had a good story line but could have done so much more with it. It didn't seem realistic that Tim would not confront the two. <P>

I like reconciliations but I couldn't buy this one. Forgiving Jan yes, but to remain best friends with Mike and offer him a job. No one is that forgiving. Like I said before you could have done so much more with that great start.

I think you need to get to work and write some new ones. I can only read the old one so many times. I really do like your work. Thank You!

Some LW authors seem to think they can be cute in naming their characters. Alliteration is not cute when all the names begin with M or C or N or whatever. The reader is easily confused about who's doing what with whom?

By leaving info out and trying to create interesting twists the story left me constantly confused about what was going on. Too many vague references to actions or past actions harmed the story. I did like the ideas; the telling was painful to decipher.

Author just can't make up his mind about what kind of people he's writing about. His own emotional life must be pretty mixed up to produce this stuff. Hubby stated it once; we may not be able to control our feelings always, but we can control our actions. The characters here are otherwise strong people but don't follow through consistently from work to personal lives. What garbage! All the sneaking around in the writing with surprise events and lack of explaining what is going on is insulting and extremely annoying.

The story line was interesting but poorly executed. Try again.

wonder where the wonder went. It's as if this writer is stuck in a rut cause she portrays such masterful confusion in the male by the fem just doing her thing without thinking about her husband and . . . wondering how she got in so much difficulty with her man.

pathetic old fart

Well written "whorror" story about a cuck and his slut. Kinda makes me want to regurgitate.