All Comments on 'Jane's Family Affair'

Great story!

another good story pops, this is only the second of yours i've read so far and both have been worthy of a good comment. this one gave me a couple of moist tingles down below as i read it i can tell you, lol!!

Please add more extended nudity, as at vacation site.

wish there was a chapter 2. love the sex between dan and bella

Love the story and the characters. So much potential for further chapters, prequels alone... Please continue! Thank you!