All Comments on 'Jane's Story Ch. 01'

You have a good ear for dialog...and a good eye for detail...and a fun spirit for the erotic...and maybe even a very good story to tell...

Keep going...don't look back...

there might be a market for your stuff...

and be sure to delete all anonymous feedback unread!!!

Now tell me it's not...your first story that is! I enjoyed this no end! You are very good at writing a tale, holding attention and, yes, arousing the reader with the detail and 'picture painting'...thank you. More please....

And so well written. A real pleasure.

Very well written and a hot story. 5*****