All Comments on 'Janie and Me: How I Lost... Ch. 02'

when she put her lips to mine.... i think i came right there for the 1st time in my life.....

now that is hot writing!! loved it!

can't wait for the next chapter!

yummy, a very tastey tail <grin>

2 of 2 like you two <chuckle>

excellent story, very ...lucious <smile>

Love the fragment, "...uncharted erogenous zones that would forever bring me pleasure now that they'd finally been awakened."

and just jumping to be ivaded"...now that's a descriptive sentence! loved it...full of humor, uncertainty and pleasure! just the right mixture of everything!

GREAT READ!

Your body responds to the excitement of a first encounter, totally understandable. You don't think it the right thing to do but want fulfillment so bad, it's worth whatever it takes for achievement. All to well, I too remember. God, it was so good!