by ubslim
Loved reading about Eriko. Japanese women are superior! Hope to read more!
First off, Asian women are the epitome of femininity, but Japanese women have them all beat because they age so well. Compared to the cows of other races, the average Japanese babe 35 - 55 is a hundred times more attractive. Empowered by their feminine peerlessness, these petite, exotic babes can demand the best of Western men: younger, big-cocked stallions, something these lovlies can't find easily in Japan. A very erotic match! And this writer has captured the dynamic nicely: Although much younger, the main character in the story is drawn to Eriko by her exoticness, petitieness and tight pussy. In turn, he becomes dominant with his big cock over the petite doll. Raw sexual attraction here: a big cock made for a China doll pussy. Hot! Loved reading about Eriko because it reminds me of my wonderful experiences with older Japanese women. Would love to read more. Wouldn't be surprised at all if Eriko is living near a military base in Japan now with a big-dicked black man, occassionally getting gangbanged by his military friends.
A good story premise, but short on delivery. The idea of Mark screwing his hot little mother was a good one, but lacked an erotic delivery. Sorry.
I really do but (just my opinion) it would make a better ending IF the narrator, known as 'Jim', and Eriko get married.
I'm just saying that would be MY ending if I had written this.