All Comments on 'Jarod Afiotor Ch. 01'

Another fucked up stupid UK cuckold wimp pathetic writer the UK must be so proud of thier husbands, are they all like this? wimps, cucks and limp dicks? I feel sorry for the women of that country they have no 'men' left to fuck them maybe they should come to the US for their fucking, wait all the white men are all cucks and wimps and limp dicks in the US. And all their wives are BBC bitch whores forcing their husbands to bring up nigger kids and feeding them creampies, is there a third option?

keep it going..waiting to read more of this story

More, please.

This pile of excrement reads as if it were written by a racist, homosexual black man. Oh, wait. I guess it was.

This was a nice garden walk through a scenario, albeit unlikely of course, and there was nothing to fall over, no verbal tree-roots exposed, no punctuational tangle-vines, and no logical open manholes to fall into, until, . .

Until we get to the Thirty-Ninth Last Step. I'll leave it to you to count back from the end, look up the word, and work out what the author really meant.

and the Names !!! Stereotypical to say the least.

Cheers,

Kilroy (a fine Scots name)

hey you homo nigger, how they hanging?

Eagerly anticipating reading more to see how this story plays out.

moreeee....

this is an awesome piece of work. Can you please post the next chapter soon. The excitement dwindles if the next chapter comes too late.

You stupid sack of shit.

You have undoubtedly have been disappointed at the anonymous comments which degraded your work.

There is a simple way to "block" them. The interesting side-story is most [not all] of them can't write to save their soul, but criticize others who try!.

I look forward to your next chapter. Don't stop!

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