All Comments on 'Jason's Story Ch. 10'

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6King6Kingabout 1 year ago

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Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 10 years ago
Care to take odds on how long he lasts once he leaves?

Hell of a story and I imagine it will be hell starting when he leaves. I kind of dread reading the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
OMG!!!

Whats a love story!!! I'm sitting here reading and crying!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Dead WRONG!!!

I just knew Nigha was pregnant! LOL. Second, Jase SO lied to God about leaving her alone! Off to Chapter 11!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OH!

I could cry!

Marquesa36Marquesa36over 16 years ago
Very clever approach

Your idea of telling it from Jason's perspective is really brilliant. It minimizes the morality issue because we don' get to see much of Nya's conflict and infidelity. It reads like a true love story with insurmountable obstacles and a forbidden love. You are very talented.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very clever approach

Your idea of telling it from Jason's perspective is really brilliant. It minimizes the morality issue because we don' get to see much of Nya's conflict and infidelity. It reads like a true love story with insurmountable obstacles and a forbidden love. You are very talented.

raunchyrareraunchyrareover 16 years ago
Fantastic! One of the best story I've read!

I stumbled accross the first chapter , and had to keep reading all of them.Posted you on my favorites.You're very talented, and I sure hope you can keep this story alive for a long time!Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Omg! How will it End?!!!

I'm in love with Jason! Seriously. But did I miss it or have they never worried about birth control? Weird. Oh well. I think she's definately preggers tho. Sigh...what a great romance. Feel bad for Brett tho. Can't wait till the next installment. :)

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