All Comments on 'Je Bande Pour Toi'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oh Raine's brother- where art thou?

Wow- Raine is hot, but Levi is like the man of my dreams. I would love a big brother like that. Keep it cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Elegant, Stupid Writing

Oh, to write with such elegant snobbishness...throwing in a bit of this language, a bit of that. And dashing sensuality to the rocks of self-admiration just as it begins to appear. To admire oneself so, how pleasing...'Nicht wahr'? And just when I needed a bit of French to really nail my display of intellect, it's not there...Damn! Narcissus, is that you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bad French

Your translation in French is very bad. Do you want help ?

strife75strife75over 15 years ago
What a pile of shit

26 cm cock lol fuck just say 10 inches like every hyped up story does.

You spent more time describing her pubic hair then her tits or ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
C'est si terrible.

My god, the french translation was horrible. I cringed. Don't let Babelfish write your story for you. Ugh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I hated it.

I hated it all.Your bad in incest go to another topic like same-sex fucking or what ever just don't read another incest sex story!

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