All Comments on 'Jealous Courtney Ch. 02'

The author's style needs improving to make the story easier to read. The vast and frequent overuse of "word -- word" throughout which most probably should be a coma if not totally removed would fix this.

I am usually pretty upbeat with my comments, but these two stories were among the worst, ever. Well enough written from a purely mechanical standpoint, but I could not see a single connection to anyone's reality. Not even anyone's fantasy.

needs to be improved, great use of the crib

It was cute...

Hey Hamster, really?!?!?! You're usually upbeat, but found these two stories among the worst you've ever read?? Want me to send you some links to some truly terrible writing on this site? By comparison these were literal masterpieces....

Nice

........needs some moderation.

Bravo sir, bravo.

Hope the baby is a girl then Mike will have 2 hellcats to live with LOL

It looks like it is going to breeding time for Courtney on a daily basis from now on. I hope it takes months to knock the bitch up.

SOO RAPING slut sis will end her childish behavior? this is more stupid than erotic...

This is great, continue it lease

Whatt good read thank you

She is

The whole logic here is fucked up

Great story, Pt 3 when Courtney is pregnant would be incredible.

Please write part 3

Please write part 3

Story is great write more like this