All Comments on 'Jealousy Ruins a Threesome'

A good idea, but your rhetorical flourishes sound like something out of the 19th century. Nubian rod? Inwardly play among the stars? Hydrated pink reaches? Watery eruption?

True story? But it reads too over the top in the language use, so really doesn't come across as true.

I really loved this story. I felt like i was there witnessing it all.

I found it to be somewhat “wordy,” and pretentious.

You’re kind of an asshole, she was upset and you didnt even care screw your dude