All Comments on 'Jeannie's Wedding Day'

Course I wondered if mom was going to walk in on them, but hey, it's fantasy! Why not let a dad fuck his little girl on her wedding day! Hope to read more soon!

Any woman remembers her first fuck.

The hymen in all women is at the entrance to the vagina, not some way inside it.

One point (more damaging than not scoring at all) for typical US male ignorance. And deceit, for pretending to be a woman. Fuck off from this site.

Learn where the fucking hymen is! Even being just inside, you're already past is you ignorant ass!

I am not a man....and I am sorry if I offended. Maybe she rode a horse as a child?!

I honestly can't take your criticism seriously if you can't put your name to it. I will leave your comments so others can read them too and decide if they feel the story is worthy of their time or not, but you're unkind words mean little to me since you won't stand up behind them.

I just wish they hadn't called off the wedding. I was waiting for Jeannie in the wedding dress, walking down the aisle with Daddy's seed running down her inner thigh. To me, that's the ultimate slut bide moment. But I still lovved the detail & use of dialogue.

This site never fails to amaze me how the exceptionally rude critics feel the need to insult and attack the authors at a personal evel, all from an Anonymous level. With regard to the author's use of the term 'maidenhead' I read it as a symbolic reference to her virginity.

As for the story I found it poignant, loving and compassionate. There were a few grammatical errors but nothing too serious. Overall I liked the story. I was a bit curious though with the mother and the bride's best friends. I cannot imagine them been that far away as to not to hear what was occurring in that room. Just a thought!

The hymen is a bit further inside. You might not want to be so aggressive when YOU dont know what you're talking about. You can totally put the head of a penis inside without reaching it. It's not directly at the entrance. Now how do I know? How am I so sure? Because I have one you dingbat! Sure I just admitted to being a virgin reading incest porn, lol. I'm a hardcore romantic waiting for love, not a ignorant woman kept in the dark. I'm a kinky virgin lol. Now to the author: I liked your story :) Did the job for me winkwink nudgenudge lol Keep writing, I really appreciated your submission!

I like having sex in showers BYE

We need a sequel to this story. Do not leave us hanging!!!

I very much liked the dialogue and the plot. The father seemed sincere enough and was willing to commit to the relationship, foregoing all of life's mores and customs. Very good turn of events at the end. Thank you! Well done! Keep writing!

Love the way the dad is eating his daughter's pussy.

Amazing... It was brilliant

Just wonderful. Always a favorite

Amazing 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼