All Comments on 'Jennella'

Well thought out. It could be the beginning of a much longer piece. Generally I do not like inter-racial stories, but this is exceptionally rich in possibilities.

Please continue its development. You have stumbled on to a wonderful device, that of the client. By bringing clients into the story, you can go anywhere with this.

Anon below does have a good point! Most law is not about law, truth and right, their idea could bring in an aspect that is missing. And all occasions for loving!

John

Tell med there is more with these two! Write some more please!

but had to get the little RACIST comments in at the end; what have you got against non-whites? are you that insecure? maybe your bio is right and you are just a stupid redneck from florida who hates every different person and can't spell or use correct grammer for shit (but neither do i on these comments, tells you how important your drivel is)

I love the quick ending usually you have a longer ending in your stories like in Commander Murphys woman im a white guy and i love reading your stories they have alot of feeling in them and the characters tell there story with humour in them.

Pat

I enjoyed your story. Five Stars!

Moving a little fast? A bit of unwanted baggage at the end?