All Comments on 'Jennifer Tests Her Wings'

I loved the story. It's highly unlikely that this would ever happen in real life; but that's what fiction is for, after all. The sex itself could have used a little more elaboration... but overall it was certainly an excape from the everyday :)

nice

hope there will be more

thanks

You need another page to bring Carrie into the story and to wrap things up with the Sports agent. Even if you write another chapter later, this one needed to at least indicate something about those two characters that you introduced earlier.

Good story, but it does need finishing. Maybe turn it into a series.

You're 100% right! It was always my intention to do a follow-up story with Jenn, Carrie, Charlie and Jimmy. In fact, I had the second part already blocked out but was afraid that if I just added it to this story it would get too long.

Thanks for the words of encouragement.

I have been a very longtime lit member and can easily sat that parts 1 and 2 of this story are the best I have ever read.