by ofloveandlust
What can I say, erotic twisting tale and every one had fun. Thank you
Nice story. Loved it. A welcome change of pace in this category.
So well written! Searching for a great story can take time and I'm thankful that I chose this one!
I really enjoyed this tale because it seemed realistic and involved characters that are all easy to like. Excellent work!
This story has shot to the top of my personal favorites list! Great telling of the sexual scenes, superb telling of the realistic relationship building between the participants, and a wonderful, plausible ending.
There had better be more with these interesting people, or somebody is going to get hurt! 😛
And decent writing.
Why can't I ever get a couple of women like that :-(
I have been a frequent visitor to this site for years and this is the first comment I've ever left! Such an amazingly awesome story and very well written. My wife and I thank you.
I usually skip FMF or FFM stories ... something about this one grabbed me - and I thoroughly enjoyed it - well written. Well done, well done, indeed!
This is the first time I have ever commented. This one was thoughtful and very well written.
Who couldn't love this? Great writing and I'm hard, nice to see part 2. These 3 do so well together.
First off, thank you! I wade though a lot of shit here to find a decent story, and have found this a life preserver in a sea of inanity. Story line, characterizations, and the inevitable 'insert Tab A into Slot C' fairly passable. For a mature treatment of the subject, I thought you did good! It encourages me to read more.
I don't particulary like your way of describing sex ! I need it a litle bit more crude !
I found your writing a litle bit too much ! But you got me good with this one ! The interaction betwenn the 2 Jen and the guy are Amazing (my title), I think this is the best FFM story I've ever read ! Thank you for that and your work ! Keep it up !
threesome sex and affection the way it should be,, well written and well paced,,
Congratulations, what a well written, sexually charged and first rate story you have written! Great style, composition and a smashingly different plot with a fresh take on a familiar tale. Clearly a 5 star effort, do keep up the good work!!
A great couple's story where both partners love and support each other enough to play together with a new friend.
Five stars from me. I loved this story without the full orgy session that I feel coming in part two. Very well written. Very good characters. I will take a chance and read part two. Thank you for writing.