All Comments on 'Jennifer's Jewellery Shoot Ch. 02'

being a virgin at that age. Not that it is impossible, just that this one had such an early start and loves her collar. She wants it and the 'Master' is being relatively decent at doing the right thing but the blackmail to the parents should be addressed. They would do better to just keep her coming back for the bondage for she has a need for it. She would too, I know how that feels

is for these guys to really be Gorean Slavers..but that would just be too obvious, woudn't it?

Here are a bunch of guys who have no qualms about lying, blackmail, forcible restraint, simple assault, sexual assault and whole host of other crimes...BUT...they won't rape her because THAT would be illegal. They've committed so many illegal acts already, what the hell does it matter? They're idiots if they think their behavior thus far would spare them prison time. If she'd involved the police at their first text with the photo and threat, they'd all be arrested. She's lackwitted enough to star in the "Perils of Pauline".

However, since both parties in this little dance seem to have squat for brains and libidos that override all rational thought, we might as well enjoy the sex scenes.

I think this is best in the non consensual category. Clearly, she is getting her thrills, but there is just too much illegal action taking place for bdsm. Well written, a certain anticipation for the next chapter, and author, it is not too late to go nc!

Enjoying her dilemma, but almost missed it in bdsm locale. Getting nice vibes with each chapter and hope it continues to a reasonable, that not necessarily believable ending. That is where the bdsm vs nc issue comes in.

Yes, keep this one going!

personally, i am loving this story. i dont see it as something for which every guy would be arrested. this is her fantasy and she is not protesting nor resisting except in a token way. i can imagine this scenario, perhaps to a somewhat less intense degree, but it is not beyond belief, and certainly not beyond fictional erotica. more, please!

They pay homage to the writings of John Norman, the originator of Gor.

Omgggggggggg, I cannot read anymore tonight or I will never sleep. A totally amazing chapter!

"Elinor Britton...a fictional character...Slavegirl of Gor."

To pick a nit, Elionor stars in Captives of Gor, Judy Thornton stars in Slavegirl of Gor

I’m a bit disappointed in Jen’s treatment after the evening is done... but this might develop more as the story progresses. Otherwise it’s moving along nicely.

“We don’t want an unwilling slut.”

Hahaha, either this character doesn’t know he’s in a story about blackmailing and forcibly sexualizing someone, or he’s completely mocking her.

Either way, the takeaways here are 1) do not trust people, 2) do not clue anyone in to your real fantasies, and 3) NEVER give in to blackmail because it NEVER ends.