What a hot story. Right to the action but with a sensual build up: Great ! Please write another chapter and lets see what happens with they have more time to play :) Thank you.
Life has a way of giving inspiration to stories, even fictional stories. I am now able to tap into that more. This is my 10th year on this site, and am more able to read and edit other fine stories. I love to entertain people, in many ways. I like to meet new people and online...