by deadeye_76
This is a GREATstory. Please continue writing. I,love all,of it. :)
So what's next? What happens when John finds out about his daughter? And why isn't Matt doming Jen now and then as he wanted too? And how about if John made Jen his sub? Forced her to her knees, made her suck him off while Matt and Dana had to watch? In fact he should take Jen away for a long weekend to Vegas or perhaps a cruise without Matt or Dana... And use her as his personal whore for her punishment for what she did to his wife behind his back. I assume this John isn't the same John that was Matt's friend that fucked Jen in the previous series.
Should have been "Jen goes to Jail" or "Jen goes to the hospital". Because at some point that's where she would have ended up. And deservedly so. What a bunch of baloney.
Before this crap went any farther he told Jen he was leaving and that his wife would NOT be coming over to play. And that, in the future, Jen should stay away from them both. Jen, thinking she was in control, started to give John orders. At which point John stood up and slapped the shit out of Jen and told her never to call either his wife or him ever again. And that if she did, he'd expose her to everyone and anyone that would listen, including all her family and friends. Then he walked out. End of crappy story.
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I wish you had not introduced Emily if you are not going to continue.