All Comments on 'Jersey Excursion Ch. 03'

Sick

gonna get some low scores mate...

from a wife wishing her husban would this is so hot. great series writing and great fantasy. like your other stuff too.

Sick

Pure garbage and nothing less!

I think your writing is spot on mate. I am looking forward to tomorrow at 8.

It's pretty good writing. But the story itself makes the reader feel as though the "joke" is on them. The husband's fantasy seems to be that he wants to eat some other man's cum out of his wife's crotch. Even the fantasy seems "sick" to me. Also, the verbal jousting that took place when the wife and the husband are both back at the room was tiring and it didn't really make any sense at all after we find out that the husband was the guy that she ran into before.

I thought that "Biz Trip Brings Out Wife" was a better story.

I appreciate your efforts though and I will look forward to your next story.

Calling this mess garbage is a serious insult to garbage.

Again, thank for the heads up 26thNC!