All Comments on 'Jessica Seduces Professor Peters'

Keep on going!

want more

I thought it was a great first chapter. hope to be reading the rest soon

Decent build-up, very straightforward, but decent. Definitely keep going, you should never end an erotic story at the beginning of the seduction dialogue like that, it's like you didn't even give me the chance to be left hanging ;)

Anywho, get on with it post-haste, can't wait to see Jessica get nasty and worship his cock ;)

more more more please!

Now get on to the main event. Both Wes and Jess are on the right track. Just finish it!

Oh Yes Mmmmmmmmmm yes please MORE! MORE! PLEASE:)

It is a great start please give us more & more I luv it!!!!!!!!

waiting on the results

Good beginning, left me wanting more.

Hi.

I was really enjoying your story. You are a good writer, you set the scene well, and the characters were well drawn with relatively few words, which is clever in a piece where we don't need to know all that much about the characters inner lives & motivations. I thought your pacing was very good & the story was developing very nicely. Please go on

And well done on your first submission, it can be a daunting world, but you are doing well

Go for it she sure is going to

I definitely want to see this story continue. You are seducing your readers just as Jessica is working on her professor

I hope this is'nt going to be just another stroke story, how about a bit of Jessica's background and homelife, it would make the character more interesting and please don't rush it with the prof, let it build up slowley with a bit more teasing.

You didn't really write enough for anyone to really know what kind of erotic writer you are.

More! Your off to a great start! Hurry with more!

I agree with what some have said already.

The charcthers were well drawn. The story

pulled me in and left me wanting more!!