All Comments on 'Jessie & The Tornado Ch. 01'

I've enjoyed your story and look forward to reading the rest.

Thank you.

I just started reading this story ,it is beginning like it is going to be a good one. Keep it up

wilbur

good story

another terrific storyline,OS69. And very good writing skills.

Enjoying your humor...again!

Good start, Sarge, continue on and I'm sure this will be another 5 star!!

It was a cute story and I'm stopping there. Panther fan.

This was a dramatic and fun story. I particularly enjoyed how the fiancé learned his fate.

Well, a good start so far ! Let‘s see what you come up with this time !

I eagerly look forward to seeing what happens next!

4/5 stars from me so far !