All Comments on 'Jessie & The Tornado Ch. 01'

Well, a good start so far ! Let‘s see what you come up with this time !

I eagerly look forward to seeing what happens next!

4/5 stars from me so far !

This was a dramatic and fun story. I particularly enjoyed how the fiancé learned his fate.

It was a cute story and I'm stopping there. Panther fan.

Good start, Sarge, continue on and I'm sure this will be another 5 star!!

Enjoying your humor...again!

another terrific storyline,OS69. And very good writing skills.

good story

I just started reading this story ,it is beginning like it is going to be a good one. Keep it up

wilbur

I've enjoyed your story and look forward to reading the rest.

Thank you.