All Comments on 'Joan Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
ending...

Just drop that last line. Good story otherwise.

menziesmenziesalmost 15 years agoAuthor
You're right

On reflection, I butchered the ending - sorry about that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story

This sounds like the woman of my dreams. Not a good ending but great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Let the story continue......

There are may ways to continue the series. Joan is paid a visit, or Joan could return to the area. What about Joan's big breasted daughter moving to the area?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Return Visits

I hope that Joan comes back to visit in the future

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hope you have some MORE !!!!!!

I loved the entire saga. I do hope that Joan will be returning soon !!! Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

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