All Comments on 'Joanna's Contribution Ch. 04'

I find this line to be fascinating and hope to read more

I would love to hear more.....being a female i find this very erotic.....excellent writing....more please

This is really good story-telling. We need to hear about the whole visit.

But knowing there's more Louise & Mattie to come is also good news.

You need to tell us what happens to Joanna after her training. Does she become completely submissive to Duncan, becoming an escort along the way. Is there life after Duncan?

loving the story, want to hear some more developments (soon please)

Thanks to all of you for your kind comments both here and privately. I do love hearing from you and your suggestions

I have been writing over on Fem Dom Cave and will have my first part of what will be a long serialised Novel coming out over there - probably up on site from around 01-04 with the first two or three serials.

I will get around shortly to writing some more about Joanna and her escorting with the Sheikh......

Exquisite and sexy.

Please do continue!

These stories are great but it's been so long since you last published.

Love it please write more

Please continue both stories

PLEASE continue.