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maxioogeeabout 20 years agoWho's telling the story?
You need to settle who is the narrator, deciding between "Joe" and "I". It is easier to read a story if you know who is telling it to you.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoyes :)
Don't agree with the guy complaining. Your story flows, don't worry. It's very good... A pity that you stopped writing... Cheers Yoron
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