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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
yes :)

Don't agree with the guy complaining. Your story flows, don't worry. It's very good... A pity that you stopped writing... Cheers Yoron

maxioogeemaxioogeeabout 20 years ago
Who's telling the story?

You need to settle who is the narrator, deciding between "Joe" and "I". It is easier to read a story if you know who is telling it to you.

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