All Comments on 'Joey's Mom'

You got this right. Well done, I loved it as I have a passion for 50 plus chubby Mums.

Great story. Reminds me of a friend's mother who I lusted over. We lived next door and I used to spend way too much time looking out my bedroom window whacking off while watching her put clothes on the line and stuff out in the yard. Unfortunately, if she looked at me that way she never let it show like your Mrs. Miller did.

Love older women they know what they want . Keep up the good work, looking forward to more of this story and more of your work >

Hope there's more...she sounds like my kinda MILF!

Or rather, he scores, he shoots, and the fans still go wild! Good and hot. Mom really has the right body type, a little extra that brings out the goodies in the best way. As the old Chinese saying goes, "Some women are beautiful to look at, others are beautiful to enjoy." Oh to be 18 again!

Just two quibbles:

“at least a couple inches”, should be “at least a couple of inches,”.

“Even a little bit mark, she bnoticed as she winced.”, should be “Even a little bite mark, she noticed as she winced.

Great stuff!

Riveting story with a real woman - with pubic hair!!! Also love the fact that while she was a little plump and not the typical literotica cosmetically aesthetically perfect woman, she turned on the young man. A hairy pussy and big tits that aren't silicone torpedoes - maybe there is hope for this world yet!

"Estragon" might want to check Fowler's Modern English Usage (Oxford UP, 1998) under "couple" before he/she makes additional comments about your word usage.

Love stories with huge breasted fifty-something year old women

i would hope you write more stories about hairy pussy.

This was well written and had a great plot leading to the sex, just the way I like my erotic stories.

very hot situation , i liked it..

I have always been a fan of this kind of story, and your submission is excellent!!

I love stories about older women with loads of pussy hair and big tits. It's even better when you've actually had one. Some guys have no idea what they are missing by going for just young thin chicks that look like babies.

Very enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing