All Comments on 'John & Carol'

I loved the whole story, I just want to know what happens next, please write more.

Good story but a lot is left open. Now if there is going to be more I understand why it was ended there. I hope you write a second chapter.

I do hope a second and third chapter and more are added to this story. It definitely deserves more of the same class and style this chapter exhibits. This is one of the better stories on Literotica and will be even better if extended to completion-addressing the relationship to Becky, what happens when they get back to school with the students and the university, what happens as they meet each set of parents, and what wraps the whole thing up to a conclusion. A great start that I hope goes on the end.

I really am happy you wrote again. There is something about your style that I have liked since the first time I read one of your stories. This is a very good one and I do hope there is more to come. Welcome Back!

I realy liked this story it is well composed good contents and a strong story line all thats missing is another couple of chapters and an ending

many thanks for a good story

Great story. Wish my life was like that. I identified with your story that much. Can't wait for more.

if thats all there is i hate it but if there is a lot more i will read every word thanks

wow, i think that was one of the most romantic things i have read in a long time.... you are truely gifted, and I can say honestly, I hope that you will do another story of John and Carol , I want to know how they end up after everything they are going to have to face

A score of 5 just doesn't seem to be high enough. Beautiful piece of writing.

I felt the love between John and Carol. I only wish there was more. I too want to know what happens to them. You give such a discription of their lives leading into it. Now I just want to know where it goes.

hey waitin eagerly for then nxt post.........plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I don't think I've ever read a better love story. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Thanks so much for your work.

Really great. I like how they both misinterpret the other's reaction -- classic and common, i bet. :)

This story was so great i wish i could have given it more then a 5( more like a 100)

Well written, well executed, great tension, filled with passion, love, and lust. This has the makings of a great book. It is rich in divergent ways it could go. It has remained asexual as I think it appeals to both sexes and deals with a relevant social issue. I really liked it. My wife says ditto.

I had heard of professorsorial shortcomings but that was superb.

I know it had nothing to do with me but you made me happy for them.

A great story so far, I can’t wait to get into part two. Part one is, without a doubt, a Five Star effort. Thanks go to the author for sharing.

And I can’t wait to read the second chapter. I’ve actually read this story once, two or three years ago, but reading it again gives me a fresh appreciation of just how good it is. Thanks for the story, J_J 1, I like it a lot.

10/7/2021--- nother incomplete story on Lit :(