All Comments on 'John and Jessica'

hot story. short and concise but arousing and well thought out!

Short but sweet. Ronnie W

All around excellent story! Just enough character to make it interesting, but not too much. It can stand very well on it's own, or a sequel would also be welcome. Great job!

Yeah, that was great! Very well written and very graphic! Very easy to visualize the action in your story!

Loved this one as it is short, sweet, and to the point! I'd welcome a sequel where you describe their ongoing relationship & lovemaking.

Excellent story - very hot, believable, easy to get into...

and just for the record ~ I don't think you're a disturbed chik at all ;)

of course i loved it, my name is John and I'm 50!

Great story, Comes right to the point. There is plenty of enthusiasm for a longer sequel. You have a nice narrative style and certainly know your way around a sentence.