All Comments on 'John Was Leaving'

.... brought back memories of feelings i had for my best bud in college. he was a straight (?) and me, PAINFULLY closeted! to this day, i wonder if .....

This story Is worth reading. It got me excited as well as emotional. Such love two men can feel for each other. Erotic but much more than that. Splendid!

You rock. I am very impressed with the slow and subtle way you built the emotion between them. You took your time and the descriptions were lovely, enabling the reader to learn to care about the narrator, and through him, for John. The bond seems deep and genuine and I hope they manage to stay together through their separation. See how real it was for me? I'm hoping for them. The sex was wonderful because it grew organically from the emotion. I hope you write more in this genre.

Even as a female it's too enjoyable.. that's always the case when a writer is good at protraying likeable characters and just a lot of lust that any gender can recognize.. whether or not the lust is directed at the opposite sex. Anyways, enough rambling.. I loved it.

well written, and very plausible plot, and likable characters. its good to read a story that have no 'stupid' characters and no character was humiliated/forced/degraded. great job.

I've always been a sucker for stories where friendships become something more and I really liked this one a lot. It was almost kinda sad at the end that the narrator was able to find love only to be forced to have it be hard to reach.

This is one of the best stories I have read. Please write more on the characters! On how their love develops.

man this was hot i kept getting hard reading it

I wish it was longer

 "A large hand of moonlight covers my floor and bed, making everything glow like a newly pregnant wife. This is the birth of – of something."- Beautiful imagery