All Comments on 'Josephine'

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Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgalmost 11 years ago
Great Story...

...But its kinda 'non-erotic', so I can understand your beginning comments. However, it tells an important 'side' or 'part' to the CD/TS story, and you covered it well. Unfortunately, you're description of how such attacks evolve is accurate, but it happens in cities as well as rural areas. Then again, its only been about 60 years since his behaviour would have had him involuntarily commited to a mental hospital. That fact always gives me a chill when I think about how brutally we've been treated throughout history. Thank you so much for sharing this!

jpb531jpb531almost 11 years ago
I liked a lot

Wasn't bothered by the lack of naughty bits tho. I'd love to read more about Jo's evolution and coming to grips with his/her sexuality were you so inclined. Thanks very much for sharing your words.

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