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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
A great start!

Byt why did you stop there? more please!

don87654don87654over 16 years ago
A lot of self-control

You have amazing self-control. I would have shot off and wet my pants with my cum long before you left with her.

yakboy69yakboy69over 16 years ago
Well done.

Very nicely written and very believable. That Joyce is a hottie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very nice

Liked it a lot. Makes a change to throbbing things right from the start;

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