by Texas_Throbber
Excellent series...good character development and background. Plenty of sexual tension and meaningful sex and love being shown. I am looking forward to chapter 3 and what is going to happen between Julie and that asshole husband John.
How will Danny handle Lorna and Julie now that John has shown his true colors. I think that Lorna might suspect or even know that Danny and Julie see lovers. Then again maybe Julie and Lorna are lovers. There are unlimited possibilities that you can take this.
The only complaint that I have is the length of time between chapters. If you take a year before the next chapter comes out you lose the readers that you have already. I found this story by chance and had to read the first chapter to understand the storyline. If you take another year to get the next chapter I'll will probably not even read it.
However I have given this chapter a 5 and encourage you to please hurry with the next installment.
Can not wait to see what happens to John. I say bye, bye... Bring in Julie & Lorna together after Danny marries Lorna all living together under one roof. Thanks
So, will Julie ditch John? Not the equal of Ch1, but it does continue the emotion, and makes an argument for multiple relationships as well as getting rid of the idea that sex with a relative is more "sinful" than any other relationship. And, beautifully written, too! Keep it coming.