by SlamDuncan
I love all your stories. Julie is a great character to add to the series, and the journal format, from her POV is fun. I'm eagerly awaiting chapter two.
Darlene
I love all your stories. Julie is a great addition to the Quinn family of characters. I like Aliyah's character also. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Gave it 5 stars!! I truly enjoy your stories. I love the way you slowly build and not rushing it.I also like the way you blend all the chapters from story to story. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens to Julie and her brother. Keep up the good work.
Think you should stick to a males point of view cause this didn't sound like a female, the way they think and act etc. But it was bloody hot.
I really like how Julie sounds redundant through her scenario with Ron, no thrills and bored yet she is a glutton for punishment.
How nonchalant she is with Aliyah, and then loyal.
The bit when Julie tells the goings on of Aliyah and David, and this is just my opinion, should be 2nd hand info. "and then she said David's dick was so huge. I wish Ron's dick was that big. She told me he felt her tits and she admitted to me she loved him... kind of reminding us that the info is second hand maybe more choppy less traditional erotica style. Other than that I love what you have here. I haven't read any other spin-offs but I plan to. Nice job
Why steriotyping Moslems come on there were lot of things written that were not true and be lil sensible killing a girl in us for having sex and that thing kept hidden I can't digest it I liked the story but stop steriotyping a. Comunity