July 14, 1928 in an Erotic Novel

byleBonhomme©

"No!" I replied with a grin.

That was really the best chapter of the book. For those who want answers to the questions that "I" had had: in the next chapter the author and his sister spend most of the night together in her bed: sucking, licking and finally fucking, interspersed with delightful impressions about the afternoon. She had seen her father's cock once, but admits that she had more than just seen her uncle's and that she learned about girls with her cousin, his daughter, only after they both got their baccalaureate - summer vacation with them.

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I hope you liked the story. For the Nude Day Contest, votes are important. Many thanks.

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by Anonymous10/20/13

"What do either of us know about 1920s French?"

Obviously you know nothing about it, for the reason there is nothing to know; there's been no French argot or Grammatical shift from the 1920's to now, hasn't been since the days of the 2nd Republic, (whichmore...

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by leBonhomme07/02/13

Larry, sure, the story is supposed to seem to be a period piece, but in French, so the story in English must be my translation/adaptation in modern English. What do either of us know about 1920s French?more...

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by Anonymous07/02/13

going by the subtitle

it sounds like you stole the story which is never good. if you didn't steal it why would you post only a chapter of a novel you should post the whole thing in the novels area not here. if stolen DELETEmore...

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by larry7440307/02/13

The historical inaccuracies abound.

If you write a period piece you must make sure you are versed in the phrasing and vernacular of the time.

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