All Comments on 'Jump Start'

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ag2507ag2507almost 12 years ago
Nicely done

I like the conceit. It works weel and was a pleasant surprise

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great

Would love to see a sequel.

photosaurusphotosaurusalmost 12 years ago
Well done!

This is quite a different style from the list of events that defined your Jack & Dana series. I still loved those, but this is better writing. Looking forward to the next chapter!

jumpingjimmyjumpingjimmyalmost 10 years ago
Passion

Passion is what makes life fantastic.

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