All Comments on 'June and the Washing Machine Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Adding a Peeping Tom to a BDSM story

without any other notice or house description as the last sentence left chapter one incomplete. A belt whipping that left welts with pressure on the welts a minute or so later bring pleasure not even light pain is not believable.

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