by oXTashiiiXo
but it was much too short! Either continue this story in another chapter or more OR revise your story by lengthening it as far as you wish to take it. My recommendation only and not a criticism. Writing style is fine and hope that you will continue to provide us with many more such themed stories. A few spelling errors like "Gabbing at the chains," but who cares? We know your heart is in the right place!
This is such an amazing story. What a dream! It surprised me how much it turned me on
i want to do this...totally described my fantasy…minus bein watched...it was soo hot..
would just be saying "NO",. TK U MLJ LV NV you chose the title from a Rock-a-Billy song from the 50s-60s by The Clantons Ike and Jimmy.,
Interesting how this story made me reach for my clips. I have them on now and it feels so good. Thanks for the inspiration, honey.