All Comments on 'Just Another Day'

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ohioohioover 17 years ago
a very odd story

It's an interesting situation, and I'd like to see how it continues--

But it's not at all clear why she can't simply go home to her family!

She seems still to be in communication with her husband (whose behavior needs to be explained, to say the least!), and taking care of her kids. And she doesn't like her lover--

So why not just go home?

I hope there will be a next installment in which this becomes clear.

ohio

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Drama

I voted it 4/4 because the drama was really good, although under-developed... but that's what sequels and prequels are for. Please expand on the story so we can understand her "odd situation", as another poster put it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
brilliant

thought it was refreshingly brilliant, not sure it needs more. Seems most on this forum like to paint the picture that sex and passion is always better with the new lover, and in reality is rarely is. This person made her bed, made her poor decisions, and is now living with the pain of it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Pieces of trash like her deserve all that can be

dumped on her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow Ohio just doesnt get it. She made a choice.

A bad choice now she wants to take her toys and run home. Problem is husband doesnt want her or her toys any more. Why would anyone want a person that rejected them, harmed their marriage, and fucked around? Well I guess if you were braindead or already had AIDS it might not be to bad.

curious_valeriecurious_valerieabout 14 years ago
wow

interesting premise combined with erotic undertones. life is a bitch sometimes!

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