All Comments on 'Just Deserts'

Not bad, for me a little quick once it got to the finale.

Are there going to be anymore Holly and Simon escapades or is this a stand alone? Would like to read more...

wow so he never really loved his wife...he is a asshole, what the hell is with all the writers making these stories so out there , This shit doesnt happen like this in real life...stop writing

or just desert, TK U MLJ LV NV

"Desert" is a very dry place. "Dessert" is an after meal sweet!

Even for fiction this was ludicrous. He's mad because she's cheating on him so he has her "trained" so she can still fuck other men? What kind of storyline is that? More likely he divorces her, she gets half of everything and they go their separate ways. A training school? In eight weeks? You think she underwent some type of psychological overhaul in 8 weeks? Don't make me laugh. This whole story was a complete waste of time to read. Poorly done.

Because I had to stop reading and jerk off. You see, while I am a man or should I say was a man I too am now nothing but a fuck slut. I used to flit and play with men and swap roles until I became infatuated with being the bottom. A friend soon took control and is now my supreme master. He has turned me into a slut and now sends me out looking for men to service. So yes I totally relate to this woman

nastycunt is my name and if you need a piece of flesh call me

the story was ridiculous,

and it was in the wrong category.

three for three

(and that is higher than the score)

Whilst this story had potential, you need an editor. The names of the men in the story - Charles and Simon - were interchanged so often the story became unreadable.

Submission emission without permission. Keep it up.