All Comments on 'Just For You Daddy Ch. 04'

your story is great but the using words like darling and splendid all the time it makes the characters sound to stuffy

Other than spelling, punctuation and grammar errors, there wasn't anything new to this story.

Keep trying tho.......

NOW YOU CAN ADD ONE MORE CHAPTER AND FINSH OFF THIS STORY I LOVE IT

THIS KIND OF STORY IS RIGHT UP MY LINES LOTS OF COCK-SUCKING,PUSSY-EATING(MY FAVORITE) AND SEX OF COURSE ALL 4 CHAPTERS ARE GREAT

YOU HAVE ANOTHER 5 STARS PLUS THAT 20 STARS PLUS FOR THIS GREAT STORY THANKS ..............................................''R''.......................................