All Comments on 'Just Like That?'

I love how you make the characters feel more real. Jill's initial reluctance and having to be coaxed into it makes her feel like a character, not just a prop like women in some of the other stories.

And the smoking hot sex didn't hurt either ;-)

Loved the way the characters seemed real (even if the premise seemed a little outragous). And leaving Jill open to continuing the wild path she'd started down was nice too.

That was one of the hottest stories on this site in a long time. Perfectly done, not to fast to the seduction or the giving in to the desire.. You have a amazing way of writing I felt like i was right there watching this.. I think there should be a sequel here but hard to top this masterpiece.. Well done!!

Colleen,Another great story.Like your others,it left me totally breathless,almost as if i were Jill!

Amazingly hot.

But with a depth of characterisation unusual in most works of this type. Which adds to the sultry eroticism.

Well done!

Good work, Colleen.

Well paced, not to slow, not too fast.

Like your style.

Ken

This story is very nice, with a long, elaborate seduction section followed by an extensive erotic part. All in all, five stars!

you are still one of the best writers around here.

You have done it again. Always love your stories the best out of all the others. Through the whole thing I was wondering if Jill and Chelly were going to get together just the two of them. By the sounds of it they are I hope there is going to be more on those two cuz I think they really hit it off. Keep up the good work.

best writer of lesbian seduction stories on this site, wish you would write more of them.

Colleen, you actually had me thinking, "would I or wouldn't I?" How about without the cameras? Does that make it better or worse? With just Chelle or more? I laughed when I realized the story had me contemplating this half-seriously. That means it's mighty good. (And the answer is no, I wouldn't. But wow did it seem intriguing for a bit.)

I loved how Jill "fought" with herself over letting her wilder side live a little, and the little devil in her won out at 42 years old. Very erotic and creative way of having sexy Jill discover something great by taking a chance. I loved the fact that she was 42 and still experiencing life and not just an 18 year old coed experimenting for a thrill. Terrific story Colleen, but I have learned that is all you know how to write.

Spectacular. You never fail to produce a well written and enjoyable story. Thank you.

Wonderful! The details of your writing are absolutely excellent. Colleen you MUST write part two.

What an innocuous name for easily the best erotic story I have ever read and believe me I have read quite a few

You are one of the best writers on this site, and perhaps my favourite. Thanks for this fabulous story!

This was amazingly interesting! I love the concept of the story. It's wild and I wish I could have that kind of a job. Thanks for inspiring me!

Vivid description and a particularly enticing fanstasy, personally. keep up the great work

the sheep

I loved this! It was so believeable and exquisite. The details of her thought process, the sensations during the sex, everything--amazing!

Colleen, you have the knack of storytelling. This story has such a realistic touch and is artfully told. I love the premise of Jill fighting her urges and finally having her defenses slowly broken down by Michelle and the other women. One is just drawn into the sensuality as the sex action progresses. Jill ends up being used by the other women, but somehow we can overlook that fact as Jill has just had the most erotic experience of her life.

I am going to read a number of your other stories on this site, but I surely encourage you to start writing lesbian fiction novels. I would surely buy the books.

I just read one of the comments about one of Colleen's other stories and gather that she passed on about 2 years ago. Although much belated, I express my condolences.

I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Very,very beautiful story,wonderfully well written-thank you so much!

Loved this story. Very well written & very erotic!

I was really into this one. I don't know if it was because Jill had her eyes closed so much or what. Wow.

Loved it. What a talent.

Classic! Wonderful plot and well written.

Nice story development. Good writing — painting each character's personality and keeping them separate.

@lovercat2942: It made me sad to read your comment that Colleen had passed. A little Googling revealed this to be true, The forward to this collection of her works recalls that she passed on May 27, 2006, and offers some personal memories: https://www.scribd.com/book/206817819/Coming-Together-Special-Memorial-Edition-Colleen-Thomas

So happy I found this again!

I read it years ago and recently tried to find it again, but to no avail. CT's work is something I go back to from time to time and I happened to open this one.

YAY!!!!