All Comments on 'Just One Dance'

by nawty_angel86

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not bad

I liked it. Glad it ended happily!

nawty_angel86nawty_angel86about 15 years agoAuthor
LOL

this story is alot shorter than i realized it was. and yeah, i'm kinda a romantic so it had to be a happy-ending lol. gosh the sex wasn't too good in this one was it? lol i need to get creative. =)

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Hello Nawty Angel

Good story, well written and very erotic. I liked it. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
puzzeled???

she had a skirt on, then jeans, then skirt ????

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
No she had a skirt on and he had jeans on....

Read it carefully geez

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