All Comments on 'Just One Hour Ch. 03'

I enjoyed the story but it would have been better edited. Poor grammar was a distraction from... what I would have been doing otherwise... Nevertheless: good work.

I agree on the grammar comment. Otherwise, rather good. I vote for Debbie to go.

It would be nice to see a 69 between the two before they go. And I'm sure they'd enjoy sucking a cock that's been in the other's ass :D

I think one, doesn't matter, get sent to my house, while the other one to my friend's! But seriously, debbie should go by air, while the other one gets to work in random homeless shelters, orchestrated by the mask, of course.

I've read almost all your stories, they are all amazing, this is one of my favs though, If I had a vote it would be to send Debbie to the new comers! Leave Stacey with the Mask. And is Stacey's sister joinging the cast?

Debbie's got to be transported to maybe some kind of kinky prison, or another country's slave camp of some sort. love the work, hope to read part 4!!!