All Comments on 'Just One of Those Things'

Curious where this will go.

Wow. This is a well thought out, yet fuckin hot as shit story. I really hope it continues and I'm glad I found you.

New year, new you. Good job!

Yay :-) great start. Thanks for coming back and sharing with us. I'm buckling in for what im sure will be a bumpy but fabulous ride!

This has such an authentic flavor to it. I like Vince and Jack. I hope there is more and you post it soon.

This story is amazing! I agree with Anonymous, well thought out, yet fuckin hot as shit. It is very well put together and your writing is clean, articulate and just damn good. A real pleasure to read! I haven't read your work before so I’m now off to check out your other story while I impatiently wait for Chapter 2!

I liked the integrity and sense of both men, and I hope this will be a multichapter series, even though I can see the potential heartbreak for them.

Very nicely done. I love both of your main characters and hope they end up together. You have me hooked

Give it a A+ for composition, grammar, proofing, etc.

The sex scenes are a tame, but also well written and readable.

I hope this one will continue. I'm interested now...thanks!

I know I read this at another time...I hope it's yours. I know people steal work alot on this site. It's a good story and whoever the author is, you or another, deserves the credit

Cannd

In response to Cannd's comment:

Many months ago I gave an early draft of the first couple chapters of this story to a few people to get their feedback. Now it seems like one of them has posted those chapters as their own work. If anyone has read this story before and remembers where, I would really appreciate it if you contacted me. Thank you.

Corey Forester

What I really like is that this is real drama, not a bilge-water dime-novel piece of romance where the two protagonists love each other but are afraid to say so and then fall into each other's arms when they finally speak up. Nor is it a pretext for steamy bathouse scenes filled with all the cliches of the porno genre. Why, it never even mentions cock size!

You have set the bar very high for us other writers -- and for yourself, as you continue this story. I really hope you can keep it up!

I am impressed and saddened that even in these enlightened times this evasiveness still happens. I can't wait to read more, the realism and the fact that Jack could empathise and respect Vince's position is a credit to him and you as the writer

What a wonderful story about a horrible situation. It is not changing fast enough. I consider myself conservative on many issues, but love is love. I'm doing my best to raise my Texas born, football lineman, loves to go to the range son to understand that, too. Being a widowed momma, I've gotten to have all 'those' talks. Mechanics, risks/benefits, combinations and permutations, I'll love you whatever, respect others, don't tolerate intolerance, safetysafetysafety, choose wisely-even for temporary choices and don't make babies till you can raise babies. Signs point to these lessons sticking........Just saying all 'conservatives' aren't any more the same than all 'liberals.' Here's to the advancement of all mankind. (And more of this story....)

I missed a sex scene between them

Oh for heaven's sake, a sex scene would have been totally of out place - this writer is giving us an intelligent STORY, with CHARACTERISATION, you know? Jeez.

I truely think this story is beautiful and amazing but i really wish you wrote more i expected more from this story. But it was still an amazing story and great read and please return and write more cause you truly have the talent :) hope to see you soon again

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