All Comments on 'Just Out of High School'

please read your story carefully before submitting it. The change in POV from 1st person to 3rd person is always irritating. It was I then it became He, Jim. Watch out for that. But keep writing & continue this story & learn from your mistakes.

That was Nice first story about the high school kid and the next-door neighbor. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter of the story when he finally gets her ass. Keep up the good work.

You need to review your story for spelling and continuation before you submit it. She wanted you to call her Vicki, and you did, for a while and then you reverted back to calling her "Mrs." She cannot be much of a Mrs. if you are fucking her and licking her out like you say. And it would not hurt if at 31 years of age if she got pregnant by your 18 year-old cock....more than one young pussy has gotten pregnant by a cock of that age. Keep writing this story but please pay attention to what you are writing.